He looks like the antagonists of my story, aside from the headgear ornaments and chest moniker. Diggin' it dude, I like the comic strip style, especially when you draw something to look cartoony, but you draw it with expertise. You could definitely make a cartoon out of your style. I don't say anime, because anime doesn't use that style, but in this case that's a good thing because thats different, unique, and overall pretty good. 8.5/11 ... lol.
