Eh, that's funny. The electricity at my place was cut out this morning, too... o___O
BTW, that's a whole lot of details in your characters' design! ...Nice

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ADDEDMK!!! That's a really neat 1st page

Nicely organized as well, and I love the idea of using different font sizes

Now I think I should make mine look a little more colourful, too XD!
And thanks a lot for mentioning me

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