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Judge Magister Gabranth

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If you write your own lyrics...
« on: June 11, 2009, 05:02:38 AM »
Post here!! ;D

Marrow Cage

Trapped inside these few walls of bone
Having not a place to call home
Forever wandering across the sand

Surges of pain flow throughout me
Stifling waves of heat surround me
Until I reach a point and cannot stand

Succumbing to this feeling within
Is this the price I pay for my sin?
Legs collapse and my face touches land

Cursed to live a vagabond?s life
Living with my internal strife
Vision blurs, my life hangs by a strand...


Just a tiny exerpt from a song that im working on called Marrow Cage. ;D

« Last Edit: June 11, 2009, 04:52:26 PM by Judge Magister Gabranth »

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Re: If you write your own lyrics...
« Reply #1 on: August 02, 2010, 04:21:47 AM »
Marrow Cage, truly unique. It sounds wonderful. I hope one day you will be able to upload it with melody so we can hear the beauty of your music. Just keep on composing. Good luck.

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Judge Magister Gabranth

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Re: If you write your own lyrics...
« Reply #2 on: November 07, 2010, 03:50:50 AM »
Wow thanks :) i really appreciate the feedback.


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Re: If you write your own lyrics...
« Reply #3 on: February 06, 2011, 02:10:51 AM »
wow, i have been looking for a place to share my lyrics, tho i don't have any except for a few left. :/ Tho I'll post one I do have left, don't be to harsh if it's not great  ;D
FYI non of it may make sense to you guys at all, it was just what I was feeling one day sooo yeah, enjoy!

HIGHWAYMEN PATROL THE FREEWAY(I know the title has nothing to do with the lyrics at all xD)

You lack inspiration, that spark in your eyes.
Without direction we're lost.
You said you'd make things right but instead you left.
I'm bitter and it's cold outside

Shelter the truth, it hurts more then lies.
I'm blind and everyone around me can't hear a word I speak.
Open your eyes.

You poisen the air with every breath that you take,
And with every step comes another mistake.
You poisen their minds with every word that you speak,
So I set out to kill every truth that you seek.

Now all you do is use me.
You better not abuse me.
Cause when you need me the most,
All you'll find is my ghost.
You'll always know what it means to be alone.

Salvations lost its desperate charm.

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Re: If you write your own lyrics...
« Reply #4 on: February 06, 2011, 02:22:33 AM »
Wow, that's actually pretty good. And no sense? It makes sense to me, I take it you were going through a rough time over someone when you wrote this...?

What genre would you record this in, if you haven't already?


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Re: If you write your own lyrics...
« Reply #5 on: February 06, 2011, 02:35:46 AM »
Wow, that's actually pretty good. And no sense? It makes sense to me, I take it you were going through a rough time over someone when you wrote this...?

What genre would you record this in, if you haven't already?

Thanks, that actually means alot. And yeah, It's about some rough times I had with not only some very important people, but also myslef in a way.

And as for a genre, I'd probably record it as something more heavier, because that's the type of music I was in to while writing that, and I feel what I listen to at the time influences how I write.

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Re: If you write your own lyrics...
« Reply #6 on: February 06, 2011, 02:37:28 AM »
How heavy we talking, The Black Dahlia Murder or bit more leeway? ;D

Song lyrics are something I can't write. I can write pretty much anything but, so kudos for this :)


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Re: If you write your own lyrics...
« Reply #7 on: February 06, 2011, 02:51:54 AM »
not nearly that heavy, I guess it'd be more post-hardcore with a mixture of screams and heavy guitars but also clean vocals and a more slow guitar. I don't know honestly it's nothing I really gave much thought too xD.

I'm not much of a writter, tho recently I have wished I could write more things like stories and what not.

But thanks man, I might try to occasional post more lyrics up here just for feedback ;D


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Re: If you write your own lyrics...
« Reply #8 on: February 06, 2011, 12:16:26 PM »
Ahhh sort of like Trivium - Shogun? What with the Vocals over the heavy guitar, mixed with scream, then the Acoustic Melody in the middle.

Could always give it a try, not a lot of Writing happens here anymore...I'm on Writer's Block atm, and can't think of anything to happen next in my Novel.

You're welcome :)
I'll look forwards to seeing more then ;D


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Re: If you write your own lyrics...
« Reply #9 on: February 07, 2011, 02:52:30 AM »
yeah I guess you could say something like that lol.

and that sucks. I like have writers block constantly except strangly during when im in school  :o thats where i think of mostly all my ideas for things. now if I use those ideas or not is a diferent matter. Im not to great a putting things together in a organized and profession manner lol.