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zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« on: April 27, 2010, 02:02:05 AM »
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« Last Edit: July 09, 2010, 04:09:28 PM by zodiac_spear_screw_up »
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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2010, 12:24:12 PM »
Wow, that's nice :o!

The eyes are almost perfect, the lips and jawline are drawn very well :D

[mind if I criticize and tell you what you can improve :)?]


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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2010, 12:52:35 PM »
hmm thats great and crescent... if people never get criticism on what needs improving they'll never get better.


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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2010, 11:34:40 PM »
haha, I'm just wondering whether I should criticize as harsh as possible or whether I should be soft about it :D

Anyway, welcome to the Hand Drawn board, zodiac_spear_screw_up!

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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #4 on: April 28, 2010, 12:52:55 AM »
i could care less, go ahead. Go and and be a critic. Not like im goin for some national manga drawing competition anyway!!!  ;)

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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #5 on: April 28, 2010, 03:08:29 PM »
Your lines are strong and nice. Most of the things you draw seem to have definite shape, too (not quivering, which is awesome XD!)

Some errors I see:
- Her left eye needs some correction: top curve (the one with eyelashes) should be longer than the bottom one [You did this perfectly with her right eye ;)]
- Hair's okay, but it could use a little smoothing, especially that strand of hair that sticks out to her right. It's a little angular. Drawing it with one smooth curve without lifting the pencil much will do.
- The chain connected to the cross needs to be of the same size.
- The left and right sides of the cross should be of the same length.

It's understandable how things easily go out of proportions because you're drawing this in a big size in your sketchbook (Yay! I'm happy to see people keeping sketchbooks ;D!!). But really, you're better than me when I was your age :o! You really have the potential to draw awesome manga/anime style art :D

Hmm... I wonder if you have any OCs... (original characters [your own charas which you create by yourself])

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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #6 on: April 28, 2010, 10:17:40 PM »
draw awesome manga/anime style art :D

Hmm... I wonder if you have any OCs... (original characters [your own charas which you create by yourself])

:)
Actually No, but thanks for giving me the idea. I really need to look at something when i draw. Maybe something with spiky hair...  ???

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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #7 on: April 29, 2010, 01:40:13 PM »
Lol try to make some. It's actually not that hard. You'll start having great fun making OCs once you start.

The trick is to give your character a personality and design them based on that. It can be anything you like ;)


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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #8 on: April 29, 2010, 10:33:28 PM »
i did start one. His name is going to Faram. He's a gimpi with one hand as an agelic lance and in the other hand has a tree-branch sword.

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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #9 on: May 17, 2010, 04:45:52 AM »
You're very talented :) Can't wait to see more stuff from you.


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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #10 on: May 31, 2010, 03:27:51 PM »
Pretty Nice, but limme (as usual with most artist and arts on FFT) go Simon Cowell on you :)

The drawing is generally good, but here are some notes:

The eyes aren't put in a very well angled position, but it looks good.
If the cross is metal, then it should look like a metal, it should be very straight or symmetric.
The way you drew the mouth is excellent! I like it! :)
If you observe for an hour, you will see an unequal proportion error, her head should be a little smaller, or widen the neck and shoulders.

Keep up the good work mate! ;)

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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #11 on: July 08, 2010, 04:31:33 PM »
Well, if stupid deviantART would load stuff, i would put more.
(i'm waiting for my Chibi Zexion right now)

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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #12 on: July 08, 2010, 06:48:42 PM »
It can't load? o__O

Anyway, I'm half done with both Ryou and Mizore, but it's midnight here and the computer screen's burning my eyes~ D:... I'll work a bit more, sleep a few hours and continue in the morning. You can expect it in around 6-8 hours, I suppose :(


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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #13 on: July 08, 2010, 06:51:20 PM »
So, in america...that'd be 6:00 or 8:00...WOOHOO :3

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Re: zodiac_spear_screw_up's hand drawn art
« Reply #14 on: July 10, 2010, 07:57:36 PM »
Hahah Zexion looks cute! ^w^

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